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Post by kenji on Aug 8, 2004 8:39:01 GMT -5
so..yeah. i write a lot of lyrics to no music, i thought i'd put one here... i don't really like the verses, but i blame it on that i didn't spend a lot of time to working on this..actually i never do ;D anyways otherwise i'm pretty happy with this. soo..here it goes.
(verse 1) Your words are like poison But I cannot resist Cannot resist
Your touch is like a drug Still I cannot resist Cannot resist
(Chorus: )
Why won't you go away (I know what you're trying to do) Why won't you leave me alone (I'm tired of feeling so cold)
(verse 2) The voice inside my head I hear it again (And again and again)
The shine in your eyes It makes me all blind Makes me all blind
(Chorus)
Maybe I'm paranoid but I'm not alone Maybe I'm crazy but I will move on
Why won't you go away Why won't you leave me alone Why won't you Why won't you Can't you just let go?
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Post by Skyler on Aug 8, 2004 12:20:08 GMT -5
hey thats cool and its cool how you dealt with the repetitions and I like that: "Maybe I'm paranoid but I'm not alone"
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Post by kenji on Aug 9, 2004 2:02:29 GMT -5
thanks ;D
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Post by Skyler on Aug 10, 2004 13:25:04 GMT -5
;D
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Post by sick on Aug 10, 2004 13:45:22 GMT -5
hey not bad
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Post by Chrissie on Aug 19, 2004 12:00:58 GMT -5
doch ja, das gefällt mir
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